Monday, 24 November 2014
Tuesday, 11 November 2014
rough cut of festival virgin - documentary
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hp6LoMpEs1s
barney, needs more shot variety of interviews and more live action cut aways.
will, the images and cut ways are good and relative to the dialogue in the interview.
the shots that are shown are well down with nice focus and background.
needs to sort the audio out on some shots with the girls, too windy and ruins the flow.
add colour correction to some interviews were its darker due to lighting.
sam, nicely shot and needs to be clear with the audio also the ambient sound works well and connections the interviews well in a better flow.
barney, needs more shot variety of interviews and more live action cut aways.
will, the images and cut ways are good and relative to the dialogue in the interview.
the shots that are shown are well down with nice focus and background.
needs to sort the audio out on some shots with the girls, too windy and ruins the flow.
add colour correction to some interviews were its darker due to lighting.
sam, nicely shot and needs to be clear with the audio also the ambient sound works well and connections the interviews well in a better flow.
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